22/03/10

First edit of the short story draft i completed at the end of last week. 433 words cut, and some stuff rewritten. I think the basic plot can stay, though. Perhaps i’ll need to add a paragraph or two near the beginning to set up the second half, but i’m not totally sure i need to just yet.

Now to let it sit for a week or two.

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